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No longer will you throw me against the wall,
or stuff me in your box.
No longer will I fall, or be under locks.

I'm tired of being thrown around like a doll,
no more do I wish to be within in your grips,
you will let me go today, let me have me,
let me have my say.
You don't deserve me, nor I you.
I don't know what makes you tick,
to say the things you say,
or do the things you do,
but I don't care anymore.
I will not let you touch me,
I will not let you hurt me,
you can't tell me what to do,
because no longer is control with you.
It's all here, in the palm of my hands.
Just as easy as 1, 2, 3,

First, I'll say goodbye.

then I will walk out the door.

after that, you won't see me again.

Simple as that. No more complexity to it then such you see.
It's quite easy to comprehend, and this is how it breaks down:
There is no more you and me.
©2004-2009 ~Immortal-Phoenix
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i don't know what to title this one, feel free to help

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:iconcelticangel1982:
wow... breaking up with someone my dear???

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:iconlimejello:
call it "No More"

abd thats just amazing. [acts like he doesnt know whats going on] lalala

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my hopes are so high that your kiss might kill me, so wont you kill me, so i die happy?
my :heart: is yours, to fill or burst, or wear as jewelery, whichever you prefer.

:pride:*dapride:pride:
:D~french-fries-unite:D
:iconrivanlord:
My vote is for "Goodbye," and may I just say that I'm totally feeling this poem right now. I'm breathing it in. I'm revelling in it. I'm letting its pain wash over me and through me. I am alive. I will survive.

-RivanLord :happycry:
:iconimmortal-phoenix:
no, not at all

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"Siempre estoy soñando en ti
Besando mis labios, acariciando mi piel
Abrazandome, con ansias locas
Imaginando que me amas
Como yo podría amar a ti"
I could fall in love -Selena
:iconimmortal-phoenix:
lol
ok, I think I will

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"Siempre estoy soñando en ti
Besando mis labios, acariciando mi piel
Abrazandome, con ansias locas
Imaginando que me amas
Como yo podría amar a ti"
I could fall in love -Selena
:iconimmortal-phoenix:
I will definitely put "goodbye" as one on my checklist for possible titles...I'm glad you like this poem so much

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"Siempre estoy soñando en ti
Besando mis labios, acariciando mi piel
Abrazandome, con ansias locas
Imaginando que me amas
Como yo podría amar a ti"
I could fall in love -Selena
:iconmeeyuh:
Another awesome poem, just like all the others. I think it sounds pretty good even without the title. =p I'm stupid though.
:iconimmortal-phoenix:
neh, it's all good, glad you like it

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"Siempre estoy soñando en ti
Besando mis labios, acariciando mi piel
Abrazandome, con ansias locas
Imaginando que me amas
Como yo podría amar a ti"
I could fall in love -Selena
:iconcelticangel1982:
oh ok then.... just wondering. I dont know if I read the discription first!!!

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